In class assignment 10/6/10

Activity #2

B.There's no use crying over spilled milk.

• Don't sweat the small stuff
• There is always tomorrow
• No sense in getting worked up about things that will pass
• Stress doesn't do any good for anyone

Counter the saying..

• Sometimes you need to worry about the little things
• The little thing sometimes counter act with the big things in your life
• It never hurts to care too much about something that happened

      I would rather write an essay on the positive side of " there's no use crying over spilled milk" because it would be easier to relate too. When going through changes in your life or even just minor details you can't be down or depressed about it. You have to take it how it is and grow from it.

Activity #5

Paragraph revision:

Original paragraph:
    A small town can compete with a large new mall for shoppers. But merchants must work together, modernizing the stores and making the town's main street pleasant, even fun to  walk. They should also copy the malls' example by including attention-getting events as often as possible.

Revised paragraph:

    Small towns can easily compete with larger more industrial shopping malls. But this would take the effort of the city occupants and store owners to keep the town pleasant and attractive by modernizing the community, allowing it to have a more fun atmosphere. It would also be to their advantage to copy malls' attention- getting events at every convience. With these updates small towns would have a fighting chance.